This is my first attempt of my leaflet the picture looks quite dull it hides the logo it still has all the times on it but not the most greatest looking or attractive.
this is my second attempt it shows that it is a music shop it has all the details as the first but the first was a recovery so the second originally did have more detail.the iPod is also sold in the shop which is convenient. it looks a lot better than the original because the colours are a nice combination together and it is alot more appealing to the eye and stands out more


I think it really stands out and i think it deserves a 6b/6a
ReplyDeletewww: in my opinion you have fulfilled the following levels
ReplyDelete4c Include appropriate text in your leaflet. Position your text well
4b Design an eye catching logo. Chose good images and position them well
4a Use appropriate colours. Address your target audience. Annotate your work to explain your choices
5c Justify your logo design
5b Justify the images used
5a Make relevent comments regarding purpose of leaflet
6c Include all level 4 and level 5 elements and also:
Use 'advanced features' of the design software for example editing the pictures in Adobe Photoshop
6b Evaluate your design and suggest improvements
6a Make the improvements mentioned in 6b
So 6a achieved very welldone.